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Story Suggestion

Post by Kezhael on Tue Jun 22, 2010 9:10 am

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Frankly, I don't believe that the person in charge should be one of the ladies working there. Given the period of time that you're viewing the game in, you're still essentially dealing with a society that's run by men. Also, having a man in charge of things would create a better sense of control over the women as they would be more fearful and respectful of a man than they would a woman and fellow prostitute. So, for a background, perhaps something from the following:

You are Satoshi. Your mother died giving birth to you, leaving you to be raised by your father, Hideo, who ran a successful brothel for many years. Your father suffered a heart attack two weeks ago, leaving you an orphan. Soon after his death, you discovered that he was a successful business man, but he had built substantial debts to the yakuza. Upon his death, his arrangement with the mobsters was broken and your father's brothel and women, your home, and all of your father's other assets were taken as payment, clearing the debt and earning them a profitable business to boot.

Last night, Suzume, the Madame who tended to the girls at your father's brothel, came to you with a proposal. She brought with her the deed to a building, a small shack well outside of town that had long gone unused, given to her when her own parents had passed away. Suzume knows you to be bright, eager, and capable. She has enough money to clean up the shack and fix it, buy one girl, and a little more. If you will accompany her, she will teach you to run a brothel and carry on in your father's footsteps. You bring not only the much-needed presence of a man, but also the name and reputation built up by your father. With her help, you can live up to that name and legacy.

Tonight marks the end of your old life, tomorrow the birth of your new.

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RE: History Suggestion

Post by Verin_Elfo on Tue Jun 22, 2010 3:01 pm

I like the idea of having a main character men to play the role of a brothel owner, as it would link to the story and simplify the understanding that the brothel was not started by a slave girl but for a person who meets the requirements for managing business. Exclamation
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Re: Story Suggestion

Post by RoninKai on Tue Jun 22, 2010 6:13 pm

Yes! Someone agrees with me. Even though back in that time period it was not unheard of for women to be in charge of such things either (look at the Geisha) so we could open up the choice between the two. We could even keep the same story or go with something a bit differant, like instead of becoming a slave your character was smart enough to get away before meeting up with long time friend and starting the brothel.
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